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Jack Jackson left a comment for AllenB"Excellent start. The story is the type that I love to read and see in my mind. I haven't made it all the way through, just the first few pages but I like it so far. There are a few editing points to make, minor stuff, puncuatuions and spelling.…"
AllenB left a comment for Jack Jackson"hey dude, story's up on my page, i'd love some feedback. Plot points, time line, character problems. Keep in mind it's still in development. thanks!"
Jack Jackson left a comment for AllenB"Allen thats sounds cool I dig stories of that nature. Do me favor. If you would? Layout a couple plot points and give just a little better image of what your working on."
Jack Jackson left a comment for AllenB"Hey there Allen. I'm Jack Jackson group manager of sorts. Thanx for being a part of our site man. I look forward to seeing your work. There is a requirement in order to be a member of the writer's group. Just display a piece work of yours.…"
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- At 4:38pm on May 7, 2009,
Nicholas D. Ward said… - And you really NEED to post some writing DIRECTLY to the site. Not a link to some other site, but writing posted HERE. Hit us up with something cool brother.
- At 4:13pm on May 7, 2009, Jack Jackson said…
- Excellent start. The story is the type that I love to read and see in my mind. I haven't made it all the way through, just the first few pages but I like it so far. There are a few editing points to make, minor stuff, puncuatuions and spelling. I like the begining although perhaps a little more plot development such as the occurences leading to the fall out of society. Some identifiable facts about the past, our present. All in all though great concept good initiative. Im ecited to read more. Welcome to the group you are officially a leader among the writers keep it up.
- At 9:05pm on April 14, 2009, Jack Jackson said…
- Allen thats sounds cool I dig stories of that nature. Do me favor. If you would? Layout a couple plot points and give just a little better image of what your working on.
- At 1:09am on March 20, 2009, Jack Jackson said…
- Hey there Allen. I'm Jack Jackson group manager of sorts. Thanx for being a part of our site man. I look forward to seeing your work. There is a requirement in order to be a member of the writer's group. Just display a piece work of yours. Let me check it out and your all good. I look forward to new stuff. Thank you mucho.
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- I'm from Albuquerque and just as bitter as anyone else who is from here. I'm a Nob Hill rat, love the old bars and the mix of people, Hate the fact that there's a new bar with a dress code. Love the random art and music that Albuquerque is filled with. Working hard at being a writer. I do lots of fiction, some nonfiction, some horror and si-fi stuff, even some poems from time to time. Want to get on my good side? Lets have some good beer and a smoke. I'll be at UNM for my master's in the fall and will see where that takes me. other than that, I'm just chasing the dream.
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Ok guys. About a week ago i found myself writing about a post apocalyptic world and could not get it out of my head. For now, it's only in short story and a rough one at that. I'm not ready to post it yet but would love someone to workshop it for me. Get at me!
Here's what i got so far, i would love some feedback.
i am human and my name is ty.doc
You can see some of my other stuff at this address
http://aspiringforgrandeur.blogspot.com
Here's what i got so far, i would love some feedback.
i am human and my name is ty.doc
You can see some of my other stuff at this address
http://aspiringforgrandeur.blogspot.com
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